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Section 9.11 Homework: Conjunctions and Clauses

Subsection 9.11.1 Part 1: Sentence Type Identification

Instructions.

For each sentence, identify the sentence type (simple, compound, complex, or compound-complex) and identify all clauses. Label each clause as independent (IC) or dependent (DC).

Example (completed).

Sentence: Although the weather was terrible, the athletes competed fiercely, and the crowd cheered enthusiastically.
Sentence type: Compound-complex
Clauses:

Exercises.

Exercise 1. The exhausted marathon runner from Kenya and her experienced coach celebrated after the race.
Exercise 2. Because the deadline was extended, I had time to revise my paper thoroughly.
Exercise 3. Although the professor has retired, she still occasionally gives guest lectures, and her former students attend whenever they can.

Subsection 9.11.2 Part 2: Sentence Writing

Instructions.

Write original sentences following each prompt.

Exercises.

Exercise 4. Connect two clauses using a semicolon and a conjunctive adverb (such as however, therefore, moreover, consequently):
Exercise 5. Write a complex sentence with a dependent clause showing cause or reason (use because, since, or as):
Exercise 6. Write a compound-complex sentence. Use a coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS) to join two independent clauses, and add at least one dependent clause using a subordinating conjunction:

Subsection 9.11.3 Part 3: Error Correction

Instructions.

Each sentence below contains a comma splice or run-on error. Provide two different corrections for each.

Example (completed).

Error: The lecture was fascinating, I took detailed notes.
Correction 1: The lecture was fascinating, and I took detailed notes. (added coordinating conjunction)
Correction 2: The lecture was fascinating; I took detailed notes. (replaced comma with semicolon)

Exercises.

Exercise 7. She enjoys hiking he prefers swimming.
Exercise 8. The assignment was challenging, many students struggled to finish it on time.
Exercise 9. The restaurant was crowded, we decided to order takeout instead.

Subsection 9.11.4 Part 4: Sentence Tables and Diagrams

Instructions.

For each sentence below, complete the labeling table and draw a tree diagram. At the clause level, assign the role Main to independent clauses and Adverbial to dependent clauses.

Exercises.

Exercise 10. Compound noun phrase (simple sentence). Complete the labeling table and draw a tree diagram for: The teacher and the principal met after school.
Student labeling table for "The teacher and the principal met after school"
Exercise 11. Compound sentence. Complete the labeling table and draw a tree diagram for: The train arrived late, but the passengers remained calm.
Student labeling table for "The train arrived late, but the passengers remained calm"
Exercise 12. Complex sentence. Complete the labeling table and draw a tree diagram for: Although the library was quiet, she remained distracted.
Student labeling table for "Although the library was quiet, she remained distracted"

Subsection 9.11.5 Part 5: Emphasis, End-Weight, and Clause Revision

Instructions.

Apply what you have learned about emphasis, end-weight, and clause management to revise and analyze sentences.

Exercises.

Exercise 13. The following passage strings together several ideas using only coordination. Separate it into individual simple sentences. Then explain: what relationships between the ideas are lost?
The lecture was long and the material was difficult and students were confused and they asked many questions and the professor stayed late to help.
Exercise 14. The following sentence is front-loadedβ€”the heavy element appears too early:
After the committee reviewed every proposal and discussed the budget in detail, they approved the new plan.
a) Rewrite the sentence to apply end-weight (move the heavy clause toward the end):
b) Why is the revised version easier to read? Refer to end-weight in your answer.
Exercise 15. The following sentence uses coordination:
The experiment failed, and the researchers were disappointed.
a) Rewrite using subordination to place emphasis on the researchers’ disappointment (make "the researchers were disappointed" the main clause):
b) Rewrite using subordination to place emphasis on the experiment’s failure (make "the experiment failed" the main clause):
c) Which versionβ€”a, b, or the original coordinationβ€”would you use if you wanted both ideas to feel equally important? Explain.